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"The House of the Earth"

It is a sacred house that I have come to,
It is a sacred house that I have come to, Holaghei.
Now I have come to the House of the Earth.
--Navajo song


Written forbradygirl_12     's Bondage Challenge, "The House of the Earth" is an AU series in which a few thousand Kryptonians escaped the destruction of Krypton and came to Earth, enslaving its people. Kal-El, heir to the powerful House of El, has just returned from over a decade of off-world schooling to find that his cousin Kara has purchased a new personal slave.

Part One:
Prologue: The Prince and the Peacock
Chapter One:  Fear in a Handful of Dust
Chapter Two: The Wind in the Ivy
Chapter Three:  Two Guests
Chapter Four:  A Complete Past
Chapter Five:  Property Transfer
Chapter Six:  Ruins in Moonlight
Chapter Seven: Beginnings  

Part Two:
Chapter One:  Dew on the Grass
Chapter Two:  Falling and Getting Up Again
Chapter Three:  Learning to Bluff
Chapter Four:  Blood-Stained Fingers
Chapter Five:  No Sanctuary
Chapter Six:  Something Deeper Than Pain
Chapter Seven:  Understanding
Chapter Eight:  Too Bright for Our Infirm Delight

Part Three:
Chapter One:  A Real Boy
Chapter Two:  On the Road
Chapter Three:  Scarecrow
Chapter Four:  Here in My Heart, I Do Believe
Chapter Five:  Idyll
Chapter Six:  Touch-Me-Nots
Chapter Seven:  In the Heart of Cheyenne Mountain
Chapter Eight:  Watching the Moon

Part Four:
Chapter One:  First Kiss
Chapter Two:  Forms of Freedom
Chapter Three:  Moving Forward
Chapter Four:  Promises Yet to Keep
Chapter Five:  The Last Night in This World
Chapter Six:  High Noon
Chapter Seven:  Clark
Chapter Eight:  Wildflowers


Vignette:  The Scientist and the Thief (Selina and Lex's backstory)

Comments

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premium_shaday
Jun. 21st, 2008 05:45 pm (UTC)
This story is the shit.
jij
Jun. 22nd, 2008 12:49 pm (UTC)
*grins* Why thank you! *runs away to plan more*
(Anonymous)
Jun. 23rd, 2008 01:56 pm (UTC)
Love this story!
jij
Jun. 24th, 2008 01:43 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm really hoping to get the next chapter up quite soon if my schedule permits. :)
zeneschal
Sep. 1st, 2008 10:48 pm (UTC)
So you said there are more to this...I'm confused as to whether or not you've posted it yet or not.
I love AU's when done right. <3
jij
Sep. 4th, 2008 05:24 am (UTC)
As a matter of fact, I finished the next arc just before leaving Japan and after it gets betaed I'm going to start posting it--probably early next week! *bounces nervously*
zeneschal
Sep. 4th, 2008 10:15 pm (UTC)
*gasp* YAY!
iheartboyslove
Sep. 29th, 2008 04:07 pm (UTC)
GOD.
I love all your stories. Your officially my favorite author of the yearrr. Keep writing awesome stories!<33
jij
Sep. 30th, 2008 07:47 am (UTC)
*beams* Thank you so much! I've really been enjoying this one...in a kind of painful, agonized way. I'll be happy to get them through to the end, I must admit.
foxestacado
Apr. 2nd, 2009 02:34 am (UTC)
GAH. No you didn't. Where's the rest of this??

So, SO good.
mithen
Apr. 2nd, 2009 11:56 am (UTC)
Oh, eek! I failed to link the last chapter of the latest arc! It's Watching the Moon, and I'll be hoping to get to the fourth and final arc soonish! Thanks for reminding me about that!
yarp_narp
Jun. 2nd, 2009 09:40 pm (UTC)
can't wait for the next arc!
I've been a lurker for a while now and have read pretty much your entire oeuvre. and yes i just want to work that word into everything i say because it sounds pretentious and funny at the same time.
anyway, this is one of my favorite series. I love the subtle emotions and how real this AU is. Epic in scale. The third arc is especially heartbreaking because of the undercurrent of sad inevitability.
Can't wait for the next one. HINT HINT.
mithen
Jun. 4th, 2009 11:43 am (UTC)
Re: can't wait for the next arc!
Hi! *hugs* I'm so glad you've liked this so far! The last arc is definitely percolating...it's going to push my action-scene writing abilities, so we shall see. :) But it won't be forever, I promise!
kirax2
Jul. 22nd, 2009 07:01 pm (UTC)
Oh please...oh *please* tell me that there will be more to this series!
mithen
Jul. 23rd, 2009 05:48 am (UTC)
Funny you should ask! I'm almost done with the first chapter of the last arc, actually! It won't get posted until early September at best because my summer is insane, but I think I see my way to the end now and am anxious to finish it up! I'm really glad you're liking it!
wanderer_owl
Aug. 8th, 2009 03:16 pm (UTC)
Still hope for next chapter. *wink*
mithen
Aug. 18th, 2009 12:49 am (UTC)
The next arc is being written as we speak! The first chapter is all done and the second is nearly done, so...progress! Expect it to start being posted in early September...
wanderer_owl
Aug. 18th, 2009 03:38 am (UTC)
Hurrah! *dance for good news*

I am looking forward the next arc. ^^
patrese1
Sep. 10th, 2009 03:53 pm (UTC)
Just found this story. Magnificent! Please tell me you are going to finish it!
Thanks.
mithen
Sep. 12th, 2009 04:39 am (UTC)
*grin* Nice timing! I just started the final arc this very week! :) Glad you've liked the ride so far...
dynus
Nov. 27th, 2009 02:50 am (UTC)
I just randomly came across this, and normally I don't really care for Clark/Bruce, but the idea was interesting enough to try it out.

And I loved it. Fantastic work. This was a joy to read and will be going into my memories.
mithen
Nov. 28th, 2009 02:53 am (UTC)
Thank you so much--both for enjoying it and commenting! I'd never written such a big AU before and it was a very fun challenge. :)
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mithen
May. 10th, 2010 12:13 pm (UTC)
Tedddd! Ted really needs more fic love, I kind of wish he got into my fics more often. :) I'm glad you liked this! I don't often tackle big AUs but I had a lot of fun with it. :)
(Anonymous)
Jun. 16th, 2010 05:41 pm (UTC)
I started reading this story back when the second arc only had 2 chapter. I loved it then and I love it now.

it is my favorite kind of slavefic where the slavery is ugly, arsh,in other word very real. Even if the characters themselves are considerate.

I loved that Bruce's strengh resonated all through the fic without letting us loose sight of how vulnerable he was in this world. no matter how much of a force of nature he was and now matter how kind Kal was he was still Kal's slave.

I also love the fact that you made the love slaves a minority within a labor worker majority. thank you.

all that to ask oyu : Are you ever going to expend on that Universe ? Add vignettes here and there ?
It would be awesome.
mithen
Jun. 17th, 2010 12:59 pm (UTC)
Oh, what a pleasure to get feedback like this, I really appreciate it.

no matter how much of a force of nature he was and now matter how kind Kal was he was still Kal's slave.

Yeah, the more I wrote the more it became clear that Bruce (and Kal!) would never, ever be able to forget that Bruce's life still belonged to Kal in a legal sense, and how that would twist their relationship so painfully.

I also love the fact that you made the love slaves a minority within a labor worker majority. thank you.

Heh, thank you for appreciating it, because that was important to me. I did some extra background reading on the subject--probably not enough, but enough that it was clear that the American-style system only works in an agrarian society where the vast majority of slaves are too exhausted and isolated to organize or even communicate.

You know, I actually have plans to write some side stories with Selina and Lex and Kara and J'onn in the future! Thanks for nudge, I'll keep turning them over in my mind and see what comes up. :)
tabru
Dec. 6th, 2010 06:14 pm (UTC)
*is dead* I read this all in two days. I couldn't stop. This was just...GUH! I'm a complete mess right now. OMG what have you done to me, you wonderfully evil person!

Seriously, one of the best things I've ever read. EVER. I'm just in complete awe...I'm an awed mess! LOLOMG *flails around happily*

I need more of this world. MOAR I say! Cause it's brilliant, just brilliant! Brava, brava, bravisima! <3
mithen
Dec. 8th, 2010 03:09 am (UTC)
Wow, I am impressed by your dogged reading! :D And I'm so glad you liked it! It was really hard to write at times, just...dealing with the subject matter, you know? But that made it all the more satisfying at the end, when things fell into their proper places at last.

I've definitely thought about doing some side stories with this one! I wanted to look at Lex and Selina's relationship and past more, and I would like to continue it a bit into the future...but it's kind of hard for me to get my head around it at times. Things can't just immediately default to normal (Metropolis especially is a very different place), so...I keep turning it over in my head. Thanks for the encouragement, it's definitely getting me thinking about it again!
evocates
Feb. 12th, 2011 04:29 pm (UTC)
One thing I've always, always loved about your fics is your amazing propensity for world-building. You don't just tell stories-you do, and they are beautiful stories-but you create entire universes that your characters inhabit. It's more than just the interactions of the main characters but also the side characters, the minor characters... and the technology, the feel of the earth, the way the moon looks...

And yet I've never forgotten once that this is still rooted in DC. Hell, this can be an Elseworld. The people don't change - even if their behaviour shifts because of what they've been through, their essence remain the same. Dinah. Ollie. Martha and Jonathan. Kara. J'onn. Especially, especially Bruce, Clark and Diana. You write the Trinity really well here. WHY DO YOU NOT WRITE DIANA MORE.

You just- have this amazing ability to just... sit the reader in the character's eyes and let them look out into that world you created. To feel it. Every single bit of it. And it's something familiar yet new and- god.

I want to be you when I grow up.
mithen
Feb. 13th, 2011 09:19 am (UTC)
*blinks at icon* What--what is that from? It's so pretty... *drools*

I'm really glad you liked this! It was a tough series to write for obvious reasons, but I'm so pleased the characters shine through with only minor changes. I do need to write Diana more! I love her and her interactions with Clark and Bruce so much in canon, I wish there were more of them. *sigh* Get them back on the JLA together, DC!

I really came to love this world and the humans (and even some of the Kryptonians) in it a lot, it means a lot to me that the emotion shows through!
evocates
Feb. 13th, 2011 01:02 pm (UTC)
i've completely forgotten where i found the original, but the fanart can be seen here: http://weheartit.com/entry/4332893. It's Bruce/Diana 8D

sdgsdgf i'm sure you've read the four horsemen - the trinity interactions there is so, so awesome. it's one of my favourite series, ever. i was so disappointed with kurt busiek's trinity series, though. WHY IS DC NOT SHOVING THEM TOGETHER MORE X[
dancing_books
Oct. 22nd, 2011 11:22 pm (UTC)
This is one of my favourite stories ever. Ever. And I've been reading fanfiction since I was 12 (I'm 20 now) - and I hope you're flattered and don't think I'm a total weirdo, but I printed off the whole thing and bound it so I can read it any time and I've never done that before.
It's phenomenal the way you understand characters, and the way you write is beautiful. I wasn't a fan of Bruce/Clark before I stumbled on your work and now I think I've read every Bruce/Clark story you've written. I'm gushing, sorry!
All the best!
mithen
Oct. 23rd, 2011 01:31 pm (UTC)
I am totally flattered and don't think you're a weirdo at all! *grin* Thank you so much for letting me know you liked this story, it was a hard one to write at a lot of different levels and ended up going lots of places I hadn't expected at all, so it means a lot to me!
(Anonymous)
Nov. 8th, 2012 01:22 am (UTC)
So, so, good. I don't usually like seeing an AU story try to make everything similar to canon, but all of your call backs were so satisfying I couldn't help myself. I was so happy he met the Kents. I was very intrigued by emotional Bruce. Selina was sad and beautiful. A wonderful story.
mithen
Jan. 7th, 2013 10:54 am (UTC)
Oh dear, I thought I responded to this ages ago but maybe LJ ate my comment? I found it an interesting challenge to decide whether to move things back toward canon or not--some things couldn't go there, others were more flexible. I'm glad you found it satisfying!
mishagirl
Jan. 7th, 2013 02:57 am (UTC)
Did a reread...still as awesome as ever! Prob one of the most emotion provoking fics ever-
mithen
Jan. 7th, 2013 10:52 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! This was probably the hardest thing for me to write just because of all those emotional levels going on, so I'm really glad it has stayed with you...
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