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FIC: Getting Practice

Title: Getting Practice
Characters/Pairings: Superman/Batman
Rating: NC-17
Summary:  Bruce requires some practice.  Clark is quite willing to help out.
Word count:  2200
Notes:  A sequel to "Attachments," a story featuring the JLI, a volcano, and a virgin...but Clark provides a handy recap of all the pertinent details in the story.

Clark Kent paused on the doorstep of Wayne Manor, a bouquet of daffodils and sunflowers in one hand and the other raised to knock.  He told himself he was admiring the wrought-iron door knocker in the shape of a dragon, but he knew that in reality he was just nervous.

It had been a few days since Superman had--unwisely--agreed to join the JLI for a mission.  A damaged engine, an unplanned pit stop, a virginometer and a magical volcano later--Clark shook his head vigorously;  even summaries of missions with those lunatics made no sense!  But somehow Clark had learned that Bruce was a virgin and the two of them had proceeded to remedy that situation.  A couple of times.  Most pleasurably.

The adventure had ended with Bruce inviting him to the Manor this afternoon for a continuation.  "Invited" was rather a euphemism; it was actually closer to "commanded."

Clark had decided he didn't really mind that.

As he hovered on the doorstep, one hand still raised in mid-air, the door swung open abruptly.  Alfred Pennyworth's lifted eyebrows greeted Clark as he lowered his hand and smiled.  "I brought some...um, flowers," he said, holding them out.

Alfred took the bouquet away from Clark.  "A very...sunny choice, sir."  He gestured Clark into the hallway.  "Master Bruce is awaiting you upstairs in his bedroom."

"In his bedroom?"  Clark felt himself blushing at Alfred's look.  "I mean, thanks.  I can find my own way," he said hastily as it looked like Alfred was about to usher him there.

The door was ajar, and Clark pushed it open to find himself confronted with the image of Bruce Wayne sitting in bed, black silk sheets tucked--just barely!--above his privates, gloriously and completely nude.

As Clark gaped, Bruce glanced at the antique clock on the wall.  "You're five minutes late," he noted as if he weren't sprawled out in a bed naked.

"I..."  Clark could think of nothing at all to say.

Bruce stretched and ran a hand through his hair, looking slightly annoyed.  "What's the matter?"

"I thought we might start with some drinks and conversation, maybe...take a walk in the gardens..." 

Bruce frowned.  "I'm not interested in wasting time.  You're here to give me practice in all this sex stuff, not compare my eyes to the night sky." 

"Oh," said Clark.  The man's eyes were remarkably like the midnight-blue velvet of an evening sky, but the look in them was anything but starry at the moment.

Bruce picked a notebook off the nightstand and tossed it to Clark.  It was a beautiful leather-bound notebook, the pages creamy vellum, a small gold pen held in a loop at its side.  "I've made a list," he said.  "I'll let you choose what we do off of it today."

Clark opened the notebook.  The first page was the beginning of a list, written in a neat, cramped hand.  The list started with Anal Sex:  Bottoming, and a long list of positions as a sub-category.  One of them was marked off.  The second item was Anal Sex:  Topping, with a similar long list of positions, one of them checked off.  The list continued with Oral Sex:  Giving and Oral Sex:  Receiving, then Sixty-Nine.  Feeling deeply flustered, Clark turned the page to discover that it continued.  In fact--he checked quickly--it continued for quite a few more pages.  Clark scanned down the list:  Phone Sex, Bondage (Tied and Tyer), Mutual Masturbation, Nipple Clamps, Rimm--

Clark looked up.  "This is a very long list, Bruce."

Bruce made something remarkably close to a purring sound.  "It is, isn't it?"

Clark frowned.  "What in the world is number thirty?  I've never heard of that."  Bruce made a quick gesture with his hands and Clark started, blushing.  "Oh.  Oh, that's what that's called.  I...I see."  He turned another page.  "Erotic Asphyxiation?"  His voice cracked slightly.

The man in the bed shrugged, a fluid and graceful motion.  "I figure, when you're mind-controlled usually the first thing you try to do is strangle me--I might as well get something out of it."  He leaned back on the pillows and waved regally at Clark.  "I'll let you pick one this time."

Reading the list had rendered Clark a bit light-headed.  He sat down on the bed dizzily.  "Bruce, sex isn't something you can tabulate and regulate like an exercise regimen."

Arms wrapped around Clark from behind and began to unbutton his shirt.  "I'm Bruce Wayne," a husky voice breathed in his ear.  "And there is nothing that I cannot approach rationally and reasonably."

Clark turned to face the other man and found himself tugged down on top of a very naked playboy.  "Sex isn't just another part of your Mission you can plan," Clark said, although his rationality and reason seemed to have left the room around when his hands had found Bruce's bare flanks.

Bruce's head was flung back and his eyes closed;  his hands were ripping at Clark's shirt, but when he spoke, his voice was controlled and almost clinical.  "Understanding all aspects of human behavior is important.  Sexuality is an essential aspect of human behavior.  I've neglected that dimension of behavior for too long."

The contrast between the cool, detached words and the bare body writhing urgently underneath him threatened to unhinge Clark entirely.  He tangled his hands in Bruce's hair and kissed him fiercely for a while until Bruce squirmed free with a kick.  "Choose what we're doing.  And get your clothes off."

Clark stared at Bruce as he pulled off his shirt and unbuckled his pants.  The other man averted his eyes slightly as Clark got undressed, a smudge of color on his cheekbones.  As Clark slipped his underwear off, Bruce busied himself with opening a drawer, taking out a few containers--Maxiumus, Astroglide, Boy Butter--and reading their labels intently.

Once naked, Clark stretched out on the bed next to Bruce, luxuriating in the feel of bare skin against his body.  He ran his hands down the lines of Bruce's form, nearly content to just lie there caressing him, but Bruce slapped his hand away almost irritably.  "Choose," he said.  "I suppose it'll have to be something not requiring equipment today, although we could use material from the cave for bondage."  He paused and added thoughtfully, "I suppose I could cobble something together that would work as nipple clamps as well.  It might require some adjustment..." His abstracted voice trailed off as if he were contemplating logistics, but his cock thumped abruptly against Clark's body as if to contradict him.

Clark closed his eyes at the sensation and took a deep breath.  "I can choose more than one thing off the list?"

Bruce made a satisfied noise.  "That would be pragmatic.  As long as they actually work together."

"These two should work together.  You on top of me, me penetrating, with you getting practice in dirty talk."  Clark almost smiled at the minute flicker of uncertainty on that controlled face, and slid a hand slowly down Bruce's chest, caressing the taut muscles.  "No penetration until I decide your...conversational skills...are convincing enough."

Bruce nodded thoughtfully.  "A new position and practice with a useful skill.  Good choice."  He gestured toward the nightstand with the different lubes.  "These are three of the best on the market.  Which would you like to try this week?" 

The image of Bruce sitting in front of the computer doing extensive research on lubricants, a fierce frown on concentration on his handsome face, came to Clark so vividly that he was torn between laughter and arousal.  Arousal seemed to be winning.  He picked up a bottle, made his palms slippery and slid them along the length of his cock, watching Bruce's face flicker between arousal and detachment.  Then he reached out with one still-slick hand and ran a finger down the hard angles of Bruce's chest, skirting the other man's erection, lightly brushing his balls.  Bruce shivered, so slightly it was almost imperceptible.

"Well?"  Clark said as he settled some of his weight along Bruce, pinning him lightly to the bed.  "I hate to break this to you, but dirty talk and silence are contradictory.  Convince me you want it, Bruce."

Bruce smiled, brilliant and seductive.  "Oh, I want it, Clark.  I want you to fuck me with that cock, fuck me hard up the ass, fuck me until I scream."  His voice was silky and very pleased with itself, and he put his arms around Clark and pulled him closer, twining his legs around the Kryptonian and nudging him in the right direction. 

Clark kissed Bruce's neck to hide his smile.  "Bruce, dirty talk is more than just knowing the right four-letter words.  There's tone to consider, too."  He rubbed slowly at a nipple, feeling it harden under his touch, rolling the nub between his fingers and tightening very slightly.  "You have to sound like you truly want it, like it's something you've been thinking of forever, like you don't know how you can possibly wait any longer."

"I do want it," Bruce said, his voice tight, almost annoyed.  "I've been thinking of it...a lot.  How it felt."

"How it felt when I did what?"  Clark maneuvered so he was between Bruce's legs, sliding between the other man's thighs, delightful friction making him breathless. 

"When we...when you fucked me.  How it felt when your cock slid into me for the first time."

"How did it feel?"  whispered Clark against Bruce's neck.

"Tight.  Full."  Bruce moved against him abruptly, a sharp motion he didn't seem to be aware of.  "A little uncomfortable at first, but then, when I got used to it...good."  A hitching breath.  "So good.  Fucking me.  I want you to do it again."

Clark shifted, rolling onto his back, nudging Bruce on top of him, their erections straining against each other.  Bruce stared down at him, his dark eyes almost hazy.  Clark ran a finger down Bruce's back, along the curve of his buttocks, then into the cleft, brushing and teasing.  Bruce's face went abstracted, distant.  He didn't seem to be breathing at all for a moment, then took a long, ragged breath.  When he spoke, the clinical tone was back again, but strain ran underneath the detachment like a dark current.  "Am I convincing enough, Clark?"

Clark smiled lazily, as if he had all the patience in the world, as if his body weren't screaming for release.  "Not yet, I don't think."

Bruce's hands came down hard on Clark's chest, fingers dragging downward, almost clawing.  "What do you want from me, Clark?  How much do you want me to beg for it?"

Clark licked his lips.  "Beg for what?"

Bruce sucked in breath like Clark had hit him.  "For you to fuck me, for the feel of you in me, against me, fucking me until I can't think anymore, your cock inside me, Clark, it feels so good I can't stand it, God--" he thrust violently against Clark's body, rubbing like a cat, "--I could almost come again just thinking about it, I need to come so badly, I need you inside me so much."  His voice was raw and aching, bare of silk and velvet, bare of everything but need.  "In me, filling me, making me want to scream, but I can't, can't lose control like that, can't--" The deep blue eyes were almost panicked, "--need, need, want, please--" Bruce finished in a stuttering rush before Clark surged up and stopped the flow of words with his mouth, kissing him, tangling with him in the silken sheets, giving him everything he had asked for and more that he hadn't.

Some time later, Bruce rolled off Clark's limp and sated body, wiping fastidiously at his sticky stomach with the black sheets.  "Messy," he said, his lip lifted. 

Clark rolled over and lay spread-eagled as Bruce dabbed at him as well.  "Sex is messy, Bruce.  Like life."  He glanced at Bruce.  "Like love."

Bruce said nothing to that, but the quick, efficient swipes of cloth gradually slowed until they were closer to caresses, circles of black silk on shining skin.  Then Bruce carefully draped a drier bit of black cloth over Clark's privates and leaned across him to pick up the leather notebook.  He slipped the pen out of its little holder, made two neat check marks, and replaced the pen.  "My turn to choose next week," he noted.

"I don't suppose 'post-coital cuddling' is on the list?" Clark's voice was blurry and warm.

Bruce rifled through the pages.  "It doesn't seem to be.  Do you think that's a skill I need to work on?"

Clark smiled into the pillow and reached for the other man.  "Maybe.  After all, you never know when you'll find yourself in bed next to someone who's crazy about you and just wants to hold you for a while and who--"  Clark paused just a second, "--who might be falling in love with you."

Bruce looked thoughtful.  "I suppose you never do know," he said musingly, and let Clark tug him down, curling up against his warm and solid body, cautious and careful.

Practicing.

Comments

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vespa331
Oct. 2nd, 2007 02:50 am (UTC)
Awwww! Oh man, so much love for Bruce here, just...LOVE.

"I figure, when you're mind-controlled usually the first thing you try to do is strangle me--I might as well get something out of it."
Ha! Oh man, you and Mina are going to slay me with this mind-control kick you're on. :D

"A new position and practice with a useful skill. Good choice."
...useful...skill...
Bruce honey, only for Miller's Batman. You're not fooling anyone.
jij
Oct. 2nd, 2007 02:59 am (UTC)
Ha! Oh man, you and Mina are going to slay me with this mind-control kick you're on. :D

I can't help it! They insist on going meta! After all these years on a team dealing with it, it has to become something of a running gag...

...useful...skill...
Bruce honey, only for Miller's Batman. You're not fooling anyone.


You never know when you might need to, uh, use dirty talk to seduce a possible informant!

Oh God, now I have this image of Miller-Bruce, all stubbly, sitting and practicing his patter. "Take that you...dinks? Assholes? Wads? Oh yeah, wads is good." [makes note in notebook] "There's more where that came from...princess or pretty boy? I suppose either would get the point across..."

Methodical!Bruce is one of my favorite takes on him, and imagining him applying that to learning about sex is both amusing and hot at the same time for me. Glad you liked him too!
scotchsour
Oct. 2nd, 2007 02:51 am (UTC)
Oooh, do I get to be the first. Yeah! I'm avoiding the other story on purpose. I know masochism is in me somewhere.

I went and read the Attachments and found it hilarous then came to this one and I swear he could be a virgo, always wanting sexual knowledge, bloody demanding he is. :)

Bruce in study mode is going to wear out Clark but I think he'll enjoy every step.
scotchsour
Oct. 2nd, 2007 02:52 am (UTC)
Ah crap!, missed it by *that* much.
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greeneyelove
Oct. 2nd, 2007 03:05 am (UTC)
The last exchange made my heart melt. This was a great follow up. So very Bruce to want to keep everything as research and not lose control but Clark's too good for him to keep his cool.

jij
Oct. 2nd, 2007 10:24 am (UTC)
*grin* Thank you! Bruce stuck in analytical mode and unable to get out is a secret kink of mine, I think...or...not so secret...
marmalade_girl
Oct. 2nd, 2007 03:07 am (UTC)
This is terrific. Just wonderful. Bruce is being so analytical - at first he seems downright cold but you so very slowly let us see what he's hiding. Lovely. ^__^
jij
Oct. 2nd, 2007 10:25 am (UTC)
Bruce is being so analytical - at first he seems downright cold but you so very slowly let us see what he's hiding.

Ahhh, thank you so much! That's exactly what I was hoping to get across--jerkiness as shield and camouflage. :)
dm_wyatt
Oct. 2nd, 2007 03:11 am (UTC)
True Awesomeness!

*grins*

Silly boys....

I loved the list Bruce came up with. So anal and so like him...

This was terrific, and I love the mind controll/geting something out of it line...

*grins*

Bruce is ever the pragmatic.
jij
Oct. 2nd, 2007 10:28 am (UTC)
I loved the list Bruce came up with. So anal and so like him...

*grins* For some reason Bruce being brutally pragmatic is very appealing to me...and he manages to make it hot, too...
zarabithia
Oct. 2nd, 2007 03:12 am (UTC)
Oh, BOYS.

They're adorable here, and I'm not sure I love Bruce or Clark more, and for me, that's never a quandry I usually have.

I love Bruce's list. I am just in love with the idea that Batman sat down and made such a list. Because of course he did.


"I don't suppose 'post-coital cuddling' is on the list?" Clark's voice was blurry and warm.


Awww, Clark. *cuddles him tight.*

jij
Oct. 2nd, 2007 10:30 am (UTC)
I love Bruce's list. I am just in love with the idea that Batman sat down and made such a list. Because of course he did.

I have this very strong image of him going shopping for just the right notebook for making his List of Required Perversities. I find this absolutely adorable. :)

A well-balanced dynamic between Clark and Bruce's likability is all I ever ask for (and it's damn hard to pull off!) So thank you!
darkdanc3r
Oct. 2nd, 2007 03:40 am (UTC)
Oh. my. god. So very hot.

When Bruce breaks he breaks with style!
jij
Oct. 2nd, 2007 11:04 am (UTC)
When Bruce breaks he breaks with style!

Truly a motto for all writers of Bruce-smut for all time. :) Thank you!
theclexfactor
Oct. 2nd, 2007 04:08 am (UTC)
Clark. Was so. Fucking. Sexy. So much so that he got Bruce to let go of his cool even for that brief amount of time. And the "post-coital cuddling" talk just killed me. Oh Clark. Just...

And Bruce. I want to hug you and noogie you all at the same time. But then again, I value my life, so I'll let that go.
jij
Oct. 2nd, 2007 11:06 am (UTC)
So much so that he got Bruce to let go of his cool even for that brief amount of time. And the "post-coital cuddling" talk just killed me. Oh Clark. Just...

*purrs* I have so much fun writing him as basically bossing Bruce into enjoying himself just a little. :) Fortunately Bruce seems to amenable to that as well. Good thing, otherwise he'd probably kill me.
ladybugkay
Oct. 2nd, 2007 04:48 am (UTC)
I don't have time to read this just now, and I'll be back to comment later, but I just have to say that I LOVED "Attachments" and am so happy to see a sequel. And the icon is brilliant!
jij
Oct. 2nd, 2007 11:18 am (UTC)
Yay! I was really fond of "Attachments" too--Bruce as a virgin was not an idea that had ever seemed plausible before, so I'm having a grat deal of fun with it. :)
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loqia
Oct. 2nd, 2007 08:22 am (UTC)
Oh, For-Science!Bruce. How I love thee so. How I love thee when you're being difficult and frightened and desperately trying to stay in control.

Work on your post-coital cuddling, Bruce; you'll be an expert in no time.
jij
Oct. 3rd, 2007 12:07 am (UTC)
How I love thee when you're being difficult and frightened and desperately trying to stay in control.

Ah good, I was hoping that fear came through eventually. There are versions of Bruce that I see as being very...brittle, I guess is the word. Controlling because certain things just can't be dealt with rationally, and that's just too scary.

Eeee, you have a Pink K story up! I'm in the middle of my own version and having a heck of a time making sense of the effect, lol, so I'm not reading yours until I'm done or I shall probably lose heart... ;)
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jij
Oct. 3rd, 2007 07:55 am (UTC)
I missed the actual JLI though! :) They are so much fun to write...

I love list-making Bruce...taro_twist wrote him once as obsessively making to-do lists in college and including "relax a little" on his to-do list, and that just stuck with me, that he'd be that regimented about everything.
paxwolf
Oct. 2nd, 2007 06:31 pm (UTC)
Fabulous, Jen! I know I wrote this in an e-mail, but I'm reminded just WHY I adored the first JLI story in this little series. SO freaking funny!

And this was of course tantalizingly hot with all the 'talk' going on here.

Such amazingly SHARP and well-characterized dialogue - I'm SO envious of this talent of yours!!! (I always struggle with making dialogue sound natural and you pull it off with such ease.)

And the little bit of Clark bringing Bruce flowers first - that's so adorable. (hmmm, for some reason, I especially like the inclusion of sunflowers. ;-) Cute.) Oh, you make me suddenly remember that JL VS episode I did a year ago! I'd forgotten that tidbit of info! Cool!

Wonderful stuff, Jen. More in this series is coming, right??

Sunflower-Lovin' Wolf :-)
jij
Oct. 3rd, 2007 08:12 am (UTC)
Oh, you make me suddenly remember that JL VS episode I did a year ago! I'd forgotten that tidbit of info! Cool!

No way! I can never resist associating Clark with sunflowers now, thanks to that story. :) Although Mina has his favorite flower as morning glories, which seems equally perfect, doesn't it?

More in this series is coming, right??

It doesn't really feel...over, does it? I realized that when Dan was betaing it, that the central conflict hasn't really been resolved...but I have no idea how it would resolve, so I'm kind of scratching my head over it! I suppose I could always use it as an outlet for exploring any odd smut I wish to write and see where it goes from there... :)

(for some reason, in my head this series eventually morphs into the other JLI story where they're having sex while on the intercom...but I'm not sure how exactly they get there!)



starsandsea
Oct. 2nd, 2007 07:20 pm (UTC)
Hehehehe!!!! :D

"A very...sunny choice, sir."

*giggles*

The door was ajar, and Clark pushed it open to find himself confronted with the image of Bruce Wayne sitting in bed, black silk sheets tucked--just barely!--above his privates, gloriously and completely nude.

*eyes glaze*

Clark looked up. "This is a very long list, Bruce."

*giggles*

The man in the bed shrugged, a fluid and graceful motion. "I figure, when you're mind-controlled usually the first thing you try to do is strangle me--I might as well get something out of it."

*snorts*

The other man averted his eyes slightly as Clark got undressed, a smudge of color on his cheekbones.

Awwwww!!!

"I don't suppose 'post-coital cuddling' is on the list?" Clark's voice was blurry and warm.

Bruce rifled through the pages. "It doesn't seem to be. Do you think that's a skill I need to work on?"


Yesss!!! Yes it is Bruce!!!

"Maybe. After all, you never know when you'll find yourself in bed next to someone who's crazy about you and just wants to hold you for a while and who--" Clark paused just a second, "--who might be falling in love with you."

Awwwww!!! *huggles Clark*

Practicing.

Of course you are, Bruce. ;)

This was a wonderful continuation! :D
jij
Oct. 3rd, 2007 08:17 am (UTC)
Awww, I'm glad you liked the little detail of Bruce being unable to look directly at Clark. He was working so hard on his cool and composed persona and couldn't quite manage it then. :)

I think maybe Bruce is a natural at post-coital cuddling, though!

Glad you liked it! It was very fun to write...*blushes*
batmanwatchtowr
Oct. 2nd, 2007 11:32 pm (UTC)
....GAH....
*twitches*
GOOD!
jij
Oct. 3rd, 2007 08:27 am (UTC)
Eeee, thank you! *beams*

*ogles your icon*
ladybugkay
Oct. 3rd, 2007 03:00 am (UTC)
Part of me really, really wants to see Bruce's list and know how he organized it and if it is in order of how interested he is in each item or simply what came to him, or what. Do you suppose he has a points system based on some personal form of measurement, or does he just really want to keep a formal record of everything he gets to do with Clark. Just how kinky is Bruce, according to this list, anyway?

I'm also very, very glad that he is open to Clark adding things like 'post-coital cuddling' to the list. LOL

This is excellent and so much fun, and definitely a worthy successor to "Attachments."
jij
Oct. 3rd, 2007 11:55 am (UTC)
These are all very good questions! I think it's roughly in order of when they occurred to him to write down (which would probably mean the list gets more kinky as it goes on!)

I suspect he's very curious about just about everything, actually. He strikes me as having an insatiable...curiosity, lol.

I'm so glad you liked it! I'm having a great time imagining Bruce exploring various fun/bizarre acts now.
saavikam77
Oct. 3rd, 2007 05:13 am (UTC)
Wow!! This is such a different Bruce than I'm used to! O_O

The bit about erotic asphyxiation and mind control just killed me. :p

And the lubes!!!!! *flails* So organized... ^_~
jij
Oct. 3rd, 2007 12:40 pm (UTC)
Wow!! This is such a different Bruce than I'm used to! O_O

*grin* Me too, but I'm rather fond of him...he's so very, VERY methodical and systematic. Nothing shall escape his Bat-analysis! Especially Clark! :)
cmer
Oct. 3rd, 2007 04:28 pm (UTC)
Mmmmm, this was such a delicious treat to read before going to work! Thanks, Jen. I'll have to turn on the AC in my car up to high now, LOL. ;)
cmer
Oct. 3rd, 2007 04:32 pm (UTC)
Seeing saavikam77's comment reminded me how much I liked your slightly different approach on Bruce. I liked how demanding he appeared and how much he planned all this out. That is definitely what Batman would have done! *hugs Batsy*
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batfan_sarah
Oct. 3rd, 2007 06:59 pm (UTC)
oh em gee yay. and hot. and yay.

i loved the previous story SO MUCH and i'm thrilled about this one.

bweee :D
jij
Oct. 5th, 2007 01:29 am (UTC)
*dances* Glad you liked it! It was funnnnn to write...
bradygirl_12
Oct. 4th, 2007 04:58 am (UTC)
Bruce, Bruce, Bruce. *shakes head fondly*

A list! A list! LOL!

Well, very typical of Mr. OCD. Luckily for him, Clark (a)loves him, and (b)understands him, because otherwise he could have been very put out by this clinical approach. But he played it perfectly, teaching a vulnerable Bruce while having fun himself! ;)

Daffodils and sunflowers! Oh, how perfect! :)

And what would Bruce's choice of flowers be? Long-stemmed branches with thorns and no roses, a la Morticia Addams? ;)

I think that eventually Clark will insist upon 'foreplay' added to the list, as in dinner and conversation.

"You want me just for my body!"

"Of course I do!"

:)
jij
Oct. 5th, 2007 10:27 am (UTC)
Bruce, Bruce, Bruce. *shakes head fondly*

A list! A list! LOL!


I love OCD-Bruce very, very much. *grin* He's fun to write!

And what would Bruce's choice of flowers be? Long-stemmed branches with thorns and no roses, a la Morticia Addams? ;)

Mina and I have been debating this, to no conclusion! We feel he'd like something small and unshowy but which had a very strong smell, but beyond that we're stumped.

"You want me just for my body!"

"Of course I do!"

:)


*giggles* "What? It's a very nice body! Clearly I have excellent taste!" :)

ranlynn
Oct. 4th, 2007 12:35 pm (UTC)
Oh God! Only Bruce would approach sex like a tactical training session.
jij
Oct. 5th, 2007 12:02 pm (UTC)
You never know when it might be important...for the Mission! ;) Ah Bruce...strange and sexy.
cavaleira
Oct. 4th, 2007 11:29 pm (UTC)
Wow. So, um. You totally just broke my brain.

Bruce...and sex...and dirty talk...and *tactics*

Guh, woman. Guh.

That is all.
jij
Oct. 5th, 2007 11:10 pm (UTC)
Wow. So, um. You totally just broke my brain.

Yay! I am all for brain-breaking! :) Bruce is a tactical thinker no matter what, lol...
crimsonquills
Oct. 12th, 2007 01:54 am (UTC)
If I'm remembering correctly, I sent feedback on the prequel to this story yesterday. I actually read them back-to-back, but I'm trying not to flood folks with feedback all in one day as I reread stories and send long overdue comments. :-)

I confess, of the two, "Attachments" is my favorite, but this is still an awesome, hot fic. Showing up with flowers, awkward as hell, is just so Clark. And I adore Bruce's list. *g* What will happen, I wonder, when they've been through enough of it that Clark want's to do something that's already been checked off? *g*

My favorite moment was probably when Bruce finally broke down and started babbling and begging and...guh. Yeah, just like the first story, it was someone with as strict control as Bruce breaking down that really got to me. *fans self*

But Clark adding "post-coital cuddling" to the list was a very, very close second. *g* He knows how to work himself and what he wants into Bruce's way of approaching the world, when he needs to!
jij
Oct. 13th, 2007 11:40 pm (UTC)
I confess, of the two, "Attachments" is my favorite, but this is still an awesome, hot fic. Showing up with flowers, awkward as hell, is just so Clark. And I adore Bruce's list. *g* What will happen, I wonder, when they've been through enough of it that Clark want's to do something that's already been checked off? *g*

I prefer "Attachments" as well, as it's really more of a story. I've found that once they're "together" it's a bit harder for me to write full plotted stories about them...

But this was also fun to write, and I liked the same things you did about it--mmmm for the moment of loss of control, yes. *purrs*
sasha_anu
Oct. 12th, 2007 02:50 pm (UTC)
Hot. Hot! HOT!

And hilarious.

But mostly hot!

*fans self with hand*

I gotta get my hands on Bruce's book.
jij
Oct. 13th, 2007 11:49 pm (UTC)
I wish I could get my hand on Bruce's...uh, book as well. *snickers*

(I have no idea what else is on that list, but it's intriguing!)
asah21
Nov. 4th, 2008 02:13 pm (UTC)
awww loved Bruce

"I don't suppose 'post-coital cuddling' is on the list?" Clark's voice was blurry and warm.

Bruce rifled through the pages. "It doesn't seem to be. Do you think that's a skill I need to work on?"
jij
Nov. 4th, 2008 02:26 pm (UTC)
*grin* Eee, I loved writing that line. Brutally-pragmatic Bruce is an oddly fun thrill for me, especially when it hides a romantic streak a mile wide. :)
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